Tuesday, October 13, 2009

Unperturbed and Undone


And it just seemed so fair

That he slowly untied all her knots

Whilst she lay there uninhibited

And exhaled her soul into the air



Picture By Gnesa

16 comments:

  1. I'd like to be uninhibited for a day >.<
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  2. Visualize it...amazing. I wish I can be like you someday! <3
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  3. @kritesh~ try it :)
    @sonya~ :)) that's a huge compliment my love...xx
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  4. whoa! brilliant once again!!
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  5. she sounds soooo lucky... :)
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  6. That's a creative thought !!!
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  7. you are getting better with each passing day
    beautiful imagination :)
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  8. What beautiful use of symbolism.
    Loved your blog :)
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  9. hey .. beautiful words.. sometimes few little words have so much meaning.. loved the look of ur blog.. looks awesome..
    cheers
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  10. did I hear some love here again? beautiful !!!
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  11. Just in 4 lines u speak volumes..this must be my 3/4th comment on yr blog..Believe it or not..i m actually reading each and every post starting 2007!!

    If you dont mind..i wud like to add ur blog url in my BLOG ROLL. Mail me at viyoma.1985@gmail.com
    if its acceptable to u!!
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  12. Well written...nice verse!
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