Thursday, September 3, 2009

A Love Poem


Me ; and he who reads poetry to me,
Entwined, Encircled and Enveloped in words

Those words which cease to be.



Picture by
coopnkai

12 comments:

iamyuva said...

still hand in hand,
bodies entwined,
hearts a tangled mess,
eyes are bright and full,
thoughts are jumbled..

fell for the forbidden fruit of indescretion.

umangexuberance said...

Hi, Your post inspired me to write a poem which is posted on my blog...
tc

Kritesh said...

^_^

♪♪HARINI♪♪ said...

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWw

DestinyFavChild said...

Blissful! :)

Priya said...

Glad you guys liked it :) I had actually written a cynical poem about love and named it a love poem on purpose. Though I guess it has a different interpretaion too( like most of the things I write)

This was a poem about a guy who read poetry to a girl and how the girl immersed herself in his words but those words 'ceased to be' i.e. never became a reality :)

Priya said...

Ok. I misspelt 'interpretation'

ani_aset said...

aww superb..jumped over from umans blog

Priya said...

Thank you!

orgasmik said...

Hi Priya,
i know what exactly you're talking about!
Thankyou for this poem,
and also for being around.
j

athul b. nair said...

short but great....

Rhett said...

ghalib-e-khastaa ke bagair kaun se kaam band hain?

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