...And he always let her have her way...She was free spirited,wilful and stubborn and he loved her for this. The summer was spent in long walks; watching the train go under the bridge...in stolen kisses at every corner and in dancing in the streets on no occasion. She thought she could touch the skies and she knew he will be there, waiting for her to come back.
He worshipped her, kissed her toes when she lied down on the grass under the moonlit sky, she knew she had it all.The winter was no less of a season...they sat around the fire swinging to the tunes of the guitar...and she slept in his arms like a baby cradles on his mother's bosom...
The sleep was over and the dream had ended.
...And she finally let him have his way...
27 comments:
Really nice ....I feel like I'm reading a poem...Nice pic...BTW ,is this pic created by you....?
Thanks,
Ajay
Thanks..nopes, I found it...
lol!!!! the last part was real funny...
beautifully written. loved it.
Loved the anti climax...bit of O'Henry ! :)
Priya the English songs I can see here are from which source ...You listen to songs from which source ?...did u learn guitar ....?...I'm planning to buy one...and then learn :-)
Thanks,
Ajay
Re-reading the post !
Just observed something curious...the umbrella ! Look at the multi hued umbrella...as bright as a rainbow...as beautiful as a dream...and yet kept away from the couple...ready to be blown away by the winds of time...just like dream ready to be shattered !
Sounding too philo...ehh ?!
:) awesome! I like to call it flash fiction at its best!
Beautifully written..
lovely as usual..
i liked the new look of your blog..and you seemed to be very happy too..
keep it that way..
i want you to read my new stuff..
wishes..
mip
That's beautifully written... you almost made me feel her happiness
I love it when it's short and effective! Lovely blog u got here girl :)
Happy blogging!
Mehreen.
cute :) the love gypsy is driving the way
Aww
oh god ..she made him kiss her toes to have his way ;)
brilliant work ...just loved the flow :)
Damn! that was beautiful!
where have u disappeared to btw??
sounds like a line from "The Notebook " is it ?? Loved reading it .thanks
oh no...that's a mistake... she doesnt need to change and certainly that not his expectation. now trouble days ahead.;)
Mysterious :)
sweet..kind of classic mills and boon style :)
by the way I am back to blogging
tc
first timer....should say was struck with the words ..:)...i was reading it for 5 times and still has a good feelin in it :)....nice way of description :)..
urs..hemu..
beautiful... the flow of words ws effortless, enjoyed reading this post..
i love your sensitive mind.....even the darkest nights becomes lovely through your romatic universe
your words dance in sensuality....
j
your senses are open. your feelings involved deep yet detached!
its wonderful that ways.
awwww [:(]
i loved it but d last line made me sad [:(]
nice blog u hv
"let him hav his way?"
All I want to do today is..read one, SINGLE happy post..!! but DAMn..!
whts wrong with the blogsville..!! :D
what happened to the happy-endings and all that stuff?
anyways..nice post.. :)
totally irrelevant to the post..
but...your new pic...You look so beautiful.. :)
Damn, we women always let this happen.
...and u let him have his way...itz soo touching... i feel some kind of pain...
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