Tuesday, July 29, 2008

Redemption


I sped up the snow capped mountain

And as I reached its peak

I saw Redemption

Dancing in front of my eyes

And as I reached out to it

I tripped...









Don't clamp my feet.

I will climb the snow capped mountain again...
Posted by P at 1:50 PM

13 comments:

  2. Tell me when you see it again!!!
    I m sure the joruney would be easier now that you know the way....:). Never mind the fall.
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  4. awesomeeeeee.

    how could a few lines be of such immense inspiration!
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  5. Wotz goin on in ur mind priya..temme temme.
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  6. Thats how we learn to fly..
    beautiful!
    best wishes,priya.
    updated mine too..
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  7. What's In A Name ?Jul 30, 2008 09:44 PM
    loved the 'don't clamp my feet' part.
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  9. priya..
    i have two more 'notapoems'
    do visit!
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  10. priya,

    this is lovely.

    i'd have loved it more if it had ended without the last two lines. it would have been almost like a zen fable. just a humble opinion. hope it doesn't bother you.

    regards,
    asuph.
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  11. feeling piercing courageous soul
    starve the senses,
    deprive the touch
    of everything
    Guard your feelings, faith
    as they must be
    as they will be
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  12. Very powerful... so glad to have found you. (I do so love poets, you know.) ;-)
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  13. lovely poem i must say...i jst adore ppl who spread optimism.
    this poem promises 2 to dat
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